Sunday, September 8, 2013

Precis: This Is Water

David Foster Wallace, an American novelist, in the 2005 Kenyon commencement speech, "This Is Water", claims that the students have graduated with a degree that has taught them how to think, but it is now up to them to decide what to think, and based on that, what they think will determine how they see the world, which in the end, is "the freedom of a real education." Wallace supports his claim by telling an anecdote that follows with the illustration of a hypothetical situation or personal experience. The speaker's purpose is to remind the graduates to "stay conscious and alive in the adult world" by being aware of their surroundings and recognizing that this world doesn't revolve around them, that if they take a step outside of their "me" zone, they will experience a world less miserable, and that the power to think and make choices is a lifetime job, in order to help them learn to deal with "boredom, routine, and petty frustration" that comes along with being an adult. The author writes in casual, sometimes humorous, and sometimes blunt tone for the graduates, which appeals to their youthfulness, in addition to his tones applying in relation to his speech: sometimes life is casual, sometimes life is funny, and sometimes life is a blunt smack in the face.

1 comment:

  1. KimAnh,

    You are a wonderful writer. You are very descriptive and can paint a picture with your words. In the case of a rhetorical precis, sometimes less is more. If this were your introduction paragraph for an essay, it would be wonderful. However, for the precis, you don't need to include quotes from the speech. It is a way for you to put in your own words what the author is presenting. Also, don't forget that while Wallace does use anecdotal evidence to support his claim, he also uses a particular word choice and examples that can be found in life. I really like how you articulated his tone and the purpose of his tone. Well done.

    I like this speech. (I guess that's why I chose it.) I think he articulates what so many people learn as they make their way through life: be kind, compassionate, sympathetic, and use your brain. Those are all good lessons, right?

    Thank you for posting!

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